Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to the specific concerns presented in the reading passage.
The lecture and the reading passage are discussing reducing the salt level on lake water in California. The lecture cast in doubt with passage by giving reasons for being not good solutions. it explains that solutions are not convenient and the reason I will show below.
First, the speaker says that water pumped into the facilities and heated is not a good idea because reduce the facilities and problems are showing with other materials that are coming with this water. As a result, chemical toxic will be part of the lake and wind contribute to separate the chemical toxic on air. this is a danger for humans and definitely not a good idea.
Second, the lecture presents the fact that bringing water from the ocean maybe reduce the level of salt but it is unrealistic because there will be necessary to build construction that cost a lot and the state is not able to pay for it.
third, is being discussed the other solution and the lecture explains that dividing the lake into several sections unlike to work for a long time and the freshwater will not be able to flow into main section.
In conclusion the lecture cast in doubt with reading because the solutions giving on reading are not suitable to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, third, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 213.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68544600939 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38991577562 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 145.348785872 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49765258216 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8783445858 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.888888889 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06452816374 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924190922689 0.272083759551 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421158054911 0.0996497079465 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268041729619 0.0662205650399 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600124313664 0.162205337803 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023024337575 0.0443174109184 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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