Technology is available to exploit the potential energy formed by tides for the generation of electrical energy. The basic structure is a barrage or dam built across a river estuary or at the mouth of a bay. This dam is similar to that used in hydroelectric power plants built across flowing rivers. At regular intervals along the dam, gates and turbines are installed. When the tide is rising, the gates are opened. This allows water to flow into the area behind the barrage, raising the water level there. When the water has reached its highest level, the gates are closed. Then the tide drops on the seaward side, and this trapped water is several meters above the sea level. The gates are then opened, allowing the water to discharge out. The force of the flow turns the turbines and generates electricity. It is also possible to use tidal energy when the water flows in the other direction - through the gates into the estuary from the sea.
In this way, four periods of energy production are possible every day, since coastal regions experience two high and two low tides in just over 24 hours. In order for practical amounts of electricity to be generated, the difference between high and low tides must be at least five meters. Tidal power is renewable, non-polluting, and contributes no greenhouse gases to the atmosphere. This kind of system can provide a useful energy supplement to other sources in an era of diminishing fossil fuel reserves.
The reading and the lecture are both about the tidal power. The author of the reading feels that it is a good alternative to renewable sources of energy. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. he is of the opinion that there are many drawbacks to the power generated and should not be used until the benefits are matched with the disadvantages of producing power.
To begin with, the author argues that dams can be built to produce electricity. The article mentions that the dams built will be function in similar to the river dams and will produce electric energy. this specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. he claims that the energy produced would only be just a fraction of the energy required and because of this is not practical source of production. he claims that it will take more time and cost for bringing electricity from the far off location as such tidal dams are built in isolated areas.
Secondly, the writer suggests that it has no harmful effects in producing the energy when compared to other methods. In the article, it is said that the this method of electricity production is a safe way of producing energy as it is environment friendly and does hamper any animals in the region. The lecturer however rebut this by mentioning that there are many drawbacks and very harmful for the surroundings of the region. he elaborates on this by bringing up the point that the quality of water will be severely affected in the region, there will be a rise in the salinity, mud and salt levels in the water which can be harmful for the species relying on the water over there. moreover, such habitat becomes conducive for the red tide organisms which cause paralysis to the animals, thus making the species vulnerable to paralysis.
Finally, the author posits that this method is completely environment friendly. moreover, in the article it is stated that it is non-polluting and cause no contribution to the greenhouse gas and is also the most practical method to produce energy as it can be used in four periods considering the two high and two low tides. In contrast, the lecturer's position is that the method is very devastating for the habitat and will eventually lead to extinction of many species which rely on the habitat. he notes that by building barrages fish migration would be hindered and for the people who rely on fishing will no longer be able to commute between estuary water and sea water which can drastically affect the economy of the region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 10.4613686534 268% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 30.3222958057 181% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1373.03311258 152% => OK
No of words: 434.0 270.72406181 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60145493852 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 145.348785872 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458525345622 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 419.366225166 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5792172734 49.2860985944 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06452816374 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174906569825 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577801859885 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549298683409 0.0662205650399 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107222711555 0.162205337803 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739745720538 0.0443174109184 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 63.6247240618 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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