in their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development.
Hitherto, dramatic globalization has resulted in an increase in the quality of product advertising, raising questions about the purpose of this development and whether this evolution brings our society benefits or drawbacks have been raising public attention. While many people lament that this is an absolutely negative development, I will overlook this lucrativeness by giving some rational reasons.
Let’s go back into the past to see what inspired human beings to create this revolution. When the manufacturing market was saturated, many businesses made an effort to gain customers so that they could generate more income and be more resilient after the economic downturn. They attempted to advertise in traditional ways, such as: in America, there was a campaign for bringing new items directly to customers' lodgings where the rate of purchasing products is the highest, or making banners. But they soon realized that customers were always interested in new useful products, so advertising their goods as the newest in the world was the best way to sell items.
On the one hand, this advertising method may put businesses’ economies in danger. There is a possibility that the new items can vanish prevailing goods from market due to the new goods, for example: The world witnessed a decrease in American stocks a few years ago. There was an economic crisis due to the excess of domestic products in their houses. Therefore, the prices of those items dropped significantly and created a sluggish development period in this nation. Furthermore, it appeared that the newest is not simply the best , it seem like resident realized this in long time ago, although many high-tech products are introduced in selling field, there are tons of foreseeable drawbacks in these items. One of the most visible examples is the house cleaning robot, which can clean residents' homes without requiring human physical strength, but it is extremely slow and unnecessary because humans can do it faster and cleaner.
To summarize, the demand for new products in the manufacturing market is increasing. However, before introducing these goods to citizens, we must conduct a survey to determine whether or not these goods are appealing to humans.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d that the newest is not simply the best , it seem like resident realized this in ...
^^
Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
... the newest is not simply the best , it seem like resident realized this in long tim...
^^^^
Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
..., we must conduct a survey to determine whether or not these goods are appealing to humans.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1373.03311258 137% => OK
No of words: 357.0 270.72406181 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26050420168 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8682513102 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 145.348785872 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 419.366225166 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5344181023 49.2860985944 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 110.228320801 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253265436505 0.272083759551 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808988572462 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488228559283 0.0662205650399 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13400301654 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581723829791 0.0443174109184 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.8541721854 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 63.6247240618 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.7273730684 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d that the newest is not simply the best , it seem like resident realized this in ...
^^
Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
... the newest is not simply the best , it seem like resident realized this in long tim...
^^^^
Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
..., we must conduct a survey to determine whether or not these goods are appealing to humans.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1373.03311258 137% => OK
No of words: 357.0 270.72406181 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26050420168 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8682513102 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 145.348785872 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 419.366225166 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5344181023 49.2860985944 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 110.228320801 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253265436505 0.272083759551 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808988572462 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488228559283 0.0662205650399 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13400301654 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581723829791 0.0443174109184 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.8541721854 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 63.6247240618 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.7273730684 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.