There's no doubt that Turtle Excluder Devices are a great idea that must be used by every single shrimping
boat. However, they are far from perfect and in need of drastic improvement, regardless of what the
author in the reading may believe.
The lecturer discusses the usage of TED, which is stands for Turtle Excluder Device. This device is used by fishermen to catch shrimps without giving any damage to the other species who is bigger than the size of shrimps. However, the lecturer discusses it’s functionality and moreover claims that the machine needs an upgrade since many of the other species such as small sea turtles are still catching by the nets.
Secondly, although according to the passage the fishermen have to use the Turtle Excluder Device due to the passed law, in order to hunt shrimps, the lecturer highlights that many boat owners and fishermen are not using the device and moreover, it is extremely difficult to trace ships whether the device is using by them or not.
Additionally, the reading passage mentions that the USA is strictly controlling the import of shrimps by only allowing foreign products that certified with official usage of TED’s but on the contrary, the lecturer mentions many fishermen are using a fake certificate. Since every country has their own regulations to give the certification, it is quite difficult to detect the fake certificates from the original ones and this situation results with a big problem of monitoring.
To conclude, both the passage and the lecturer have different opinions on the functionality and proper usage of TED.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: IT_IS[22]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...hrimps. However, the lecturer discusses it’s functionality and moreover claims that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, still, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 222.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13063063063 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7113263322 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7214914609 49.2860985944 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.714285714 110.228320801 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7142857143 21.698381199 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06452816374 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143830198846 0.272083759551 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612980037135 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414388799273 0.0662205650399 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777811950639 0.162205337803 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529436506296 0.0443174109184 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.3589403974 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.8541721854 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.0289183223 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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