In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Stepping into the era of information, the working pace in most companies is faster than before. In many cases, quick decisions need to be made, and mistakes are sometimes inevitable. Regarding to a project, should we prioritize the efficiency and sacrifice the correctness? It very much depends on the types of work that is involved.
For demanding job that requires decisive actions, it is definitely more important to finish the task in time. Public Representatives are one of those occupation that requires dynamic employees who can make the optimum decision. There is not enough time for a PR to go over all the documents, or to wait for a thorough report for one event. The public usually expect instant responce or actions towrding an incident. Anothe example is the bid, real estate executives only have a few minutes to think about if a deal is worth bidding. there is an example in the popular book "Influnce", the CEO of ABC bought the franchise of a TV Show with a very high price. He regret it later on, but it was too late. This is the risks that one have to take in situations like that.
For sicentific research and artistic work, there is no need to be in a hurry. The purpose of scientific research is to gain accurate data and draw inspiring conclusions. Only through days and nights of hard-working can scientists get a breakthrough in a specific research field. There are cases of fraus and fake scientific reasearches reported in recent years, like the norious Professor in Harword University who cheated on one of it's papers, and this had a significant impact in many other reserchers. On the other hand, great art are usually created by thoses who spent years on polishing them. Michel spent over ten years in her bed to compose the classic "Gone with the Wind". Van Goal painted over 12 paintings in order to portrait the perfect one.
To sum up, time is money in business world. Technologies update fast, and capitals flow from one's hands to another. So, one may lose much more if he or she doesn't act quickly. While in the field of science and art, time is worth investing in creating classics.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this occupation' or 'those occupations'?
Suggestion: this occupation; those occupations
...time. Public Representatives are one of those occupation that requires dynamic employees who can...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...think about if a deal is worth bidding. there is an example in the popular book &apos...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'regrets'.
Suggestion: regrets
...of a TV Show with a very high price. He regret it later on, but it was too late. This ...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ies update fast, and capitals flow from ones hands to another. So, one may lose much...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...So, one may lose much more if he or she doesnt act quickly. While in the field of scie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, so, while, as to, in many cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 30.3222958057 191% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 372.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77956989247 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82759411385 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 145.348785872 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5911348979 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3043478261 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1739130435 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73913043478 7.06452816374 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12934011612 0.272083759551 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316791743867 0.0996497079465 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368376098973 0.0662205650399 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760627963013 0.162205337803 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054928297073 0.0443174109184 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.3589403974 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 63.6247240618 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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