In the US many of employees work five days in week, on the other hand a majority of employees like work four day in week and get fewer salary. thus, government have a plan for companies to offer their employees to four days working in week with fewer payment (about 80 percent of normal pay).
In the passage refer to advantages of this policy, for example: employees are resting more and it is preventing them from error working in their jobs. This type of working have a good influence in company profit and reduce cost of organization. In the final of passage explain about this policy and influence on individual life of employees, it is explaining employees have a enough time for rest and improvement their quality of life, in additionally spend more time with their families.
The lecturer says about disadvantages of four hours working. at first the companies have to spend more money, because hiring new worker is costly and need to most office space, most pay for training new workers. In the final four days’ work decrease job stability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
... four day in week and get fewer salary. thus, government have a plan for companies t...
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
... advantages of this policy, for example: employees are resting more and it is pre...
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...loyees, it is explaining employees have a enough time for rest and improvement th...
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...ut disadvantages of four hours working. at first the companies have to spend more ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, thus, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 12.0772626932 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 1373.03311258 64% => OK
No of words: 182.0 270.72406181 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81318681319 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57876758655 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 419.366225166 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6125814197 49.2860985944 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474710587399 0.272083759551 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198750762926 0.0996497079465 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114155906764 0.0662205650399 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309899695779 0.162205337803 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115328297504 0.0443174109184 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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