In the passage above describes the benefits of teamwork as opposed to individual work. Working as a team achieves higher quality and creative results whereas working individually is restricted to fewer skills.
In Teamwork, everybody gets a chance to contribute in decision making with different ideas and expertise bringing up good end results however, this can also lead to members making risky decisions. This is because if the end result is not favorable then the group as a whole will be responsible.
Professor supports both the benefits and drawbacks of teamwork further explaining that teamwork leads to productive decisions, includes creative ideas and ability to communicate with each other to come to a better conclusion. However, working in a team also leads to disagreements among the members and it may cause unnecessary delays because of too much of idea sharing and not making a quick decision. Also, there are some free loaders that do not contribute but get benefit for the work done by other mates. This is a demotivating factor for those who work hard but do not get individually recognized and end up with shared reward.
He supported this with an example that the team made a decision that was too risky and the outcome was not certain. Some of the member highlighted the uncertainty of the decision however, they were ignored. Well, as a result the project failed and the complete team was blamed for it. The team did not carefully thought about the uncertainty highlighted by some members causing poor decision being made.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...wever, the lecturer disagrees to almost all of the benefits explained. Firstly, the pas...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e passage illustrates that in a teamwork , all the members specializes in differen...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...n because they had to come for meetings everyday and there were disagreements among the ...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r further explains this by stating that some of the teams have dominating members who monop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 364.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03021978022 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66977269539 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467032967033 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 419.366225166 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8816371832 49.2860985944 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.583333333 110.228320801 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 21.698381199 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327764411588 0.272083759551 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129991465705 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073643665412 0.0662205650399 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166004472659 0.162205337803 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114386954561 0.0443174109184 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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