TPO 03- Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style, and indeed the representation of the woman’s face is very much like that of portraits known to be by Rembrandt. But there are problems with the painting that suggest it could not be a work by Rembrandt.
The reading and lecture are both about the Rembrandt. The author of the reading believes that the paintings are not actually made by the famous Dutch painter. However, the lecturer casts doubts about the claims made in the article, saying that her arguments are inaccurate compared to facts.
First of all, The author points out that the dress of the old woman has some inconsistency in details. The article notes that Rembrandt is keen for details and he will not omit mistakes such as wearing a white linen cap which suggest a maid but also wearing coat which shows aristocracy. The point is challenged by the lecturer. She says that in closer inspection of the fur collar through Xray the analysis in the paint wasn't in the original painting, thus, it is only done to increase the value if the painting. In addition, the painting was an original art work of Rembrandt.
Secondly, the author contends that details in the facial features of the lady appears only in partial shadow. The articles establishes that the face was illuminated by light reflected from below. However, the lecturer rebuts this argument. She depicts that when the fur collar was removed that a simple collar light cloth reflect light and illuminates upon her face. She elaborates on this by mentioning that in this kind of style is trademark craftmanship of Rembrandt.
Finally, the author states that the back portion of the painting was made from wood that is glued together. The article mentions that the Rembrandt only uses wood panels. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that the wood panel make the painting looks larger and increase in value. She puts forth the idea that the in the painting of the old woman the material was used was of a single wood. Also, Some pieces of wood in the Old lady with white bonnet has the same tree used on another portrait from Rembrandt and that is the portrait with a hat.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... through Xray the analysis in the paint wasnt in the original painting, thus, it is o...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'establish'.
Suggestion: establish
...s only in partial shadow. The articles establishes that the face was illuminated by light ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 330.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7696969697 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4023557462 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518181818182 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4030177227 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474700042448 0.272083759551 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131994897266 0.0996497079465 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783968595777 0.0662205650399 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255914231346 0.162205337803 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719789279623 0.0443174109184 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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