Both the passage and the lecture discuss endotherms mammal, which are mammal that can maintain their body temperature 37 °in cold season.
Moreover, there is debate between passage and lecture that whether dinasours were endotherms or not.
The lecture state that there is no evidence that dinasours were endotherms ,However the passage brought many flows and cast doubt.
First, The passage claims because dinasours fossil found in polar regin and ,because polar regin is cold area , so only those mammal can live there if they can maintain their body temperature. So the passage claims dinasours are modern reptile.
On the other hands, the lecture dispute the argument by providing reason that polar regin was much warmer than today , so it doesn't prove that dinasours are endotherms.
Second, the passage state dinasours had leg beneath their body which let them to execute activity like running only endotherms animal can have such characteristics, however the lecture dispute by saying that leg beneath their body can let animal to maintain high energy and support more weights.
The last argument, the passage state that dinasours has bone structure called harversran canal which cause rapid growth in dinasours , they claim this is another characteristics of endotherms, although the lecture did not accept the argument by stating bone structure in dinasours only show rapid growth in warm place ,despite dinasours were not able to grow in cold place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... endotherms or not. The lecture state that there is no evidence that dinasours...
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...inasours fossil found in polar regin and ,because polar regin is cold area , so on...
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...in and ,because polar regin is cold area , so only those mammal can live there if ...
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...t polar regin was much warmer than today , so it doesnt prove that dinasours are e...
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...egin was much warmer than today , so it doesnt prove that dinasours are endotherms. ...
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...were not able to grow in cold place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 232.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37931034483 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49968762195 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.7167665597 49.2860985944 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.0 110.228320801 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 21.698381199 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06452816374 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.09492273731 171% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227271585913 0.272083759551 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111261522113 0.0996497079465 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409042922319 0.0662205650399 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120376782232 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336295587103 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.3589403974 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.8541721854 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 63.6247240618 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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