Sea otter declination is the topic of discussion in the lecture and paragraph. Paragraph states the reason of declination is environmental pollution. Whereas, lecture says predation is the major reason for the sea otter decline.
First reason paragraph states that water has known sources of oil rigs and chemical and sample also reveals level of chemical from the industries in water has been increased. Contrary to this opinion, lecture says that no one finds any dead bodies of sea otters if they are dying due to pollution. Lecture supports his point by adding that it is hard to find otters which shows that they have been attacked by the predators.
Secondly, paragraph shows that other mammals like seals and sea lions are also declining which means that entire ecosystem is affecting due to environmental pollution and they are not being attacked by orca whales. Whereas, lecture says that orca prefers large whales but whales essentially disappeared from the coastal region because of human hunters. Orca whales have to attack other small sea mammals like seals, sea lions and otters in the absence of large whales.
Thirdly, paragraph depicts that sea otter is declining in uneven pattern through the coast because of uneven ocean currents and environmental factors. While, lecture states that orca whales are very large in size which means these predators can not access some locations. Orca can not access shadow and rocky locations which shows uneven pattern in the declining of the sea otters.
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in the last paragraph shadow should be shallow.
by the best wishes
Lecture supports his point by
Lecture supports his point by adding that it is hard to find otters which shows that they have been attacked by the predators.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ean currents and environmental factors. While, lecture states that orca whales are ve...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: large
...ecture states that orca whales are very large in size which means these predators can not acc...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'whereas', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.339622641509 0.261695866417 130% => OK
Verbs: 0.158490566038 0.158904122519 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0943396226415 0.0723426182421 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0339622641509 0.0435111971325 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0188679245283 0.0277247811725 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135849056604 0.128828473217 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0490566037736 0.0370669169778 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47883832353 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0188679245283 0.0208969081088 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0641509433962 0.128158765124 50% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00754716981132 0.0158828679856 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0188679245283 0.0114777025283 164% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1507.0 1645.83664459 92% => OK
No of words: 246.0 271.125827815 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12601626016 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04852973271 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373983739837 0.374372842146 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264227642276 0.287516216867 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174796747967 0.187439937562 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117886178862 0.113142543107 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47883832353 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49593495935 0.539623497131 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.9148694939 53.8517498576 85% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0529801325 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5 21.7502111507 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7082240292 49.3711431718 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.583333333 132.220823453 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 21.7502111507 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.878197800319 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 46.9227642276 50.5018328374 93% => OK
Elegance: 2.48214285714 1.90840788429 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.539432848122 0.549887131256 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.1800618802 0.142949733639 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.118466899257 0.0787303798458 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.631323686735 0.631733273073 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0914083110068 0.139662658121 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.261852107838 0.266732575781 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921622688756 0.103435571967 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310857658037 0.414875509568 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.044599870512 0.0530846634433 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.383179659645 0.40443939384 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368677537619 0.0528353158467 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.26048565121 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.1766004415 189% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.