TPO 11: a decline in reading the literature
The reading passage and lecture are both about less reading of books is recognised in today's world also it directs to decline culture in usual. The article strongly postulates that especially in novel-writing is mostly neglected adversely by the public. On the other hand, the listening adamantly delineates that it is not somewhat persuasive critics because of several compelling reasons.
First and foremost, According to the author of the excerpt that reducing public reading causes a lack of instigation and mental stimulation which are given by literature. Nonetheless, The professor offsets these points by declaring that there are many high-quality books which give fairly good vision about everything such as history and political which include great scientific knowledge compared to the novels and poems.
On top of this, The professor in the listening elaborates by bringing up the point that paying attention in the tv, music or movie is not declining the culture worthwhile in reality, in other words, it may encourage to learn from the culture through listening to a piece of charming music and watching an exceptional movie. these claims refute the writer's implications which people prefer to spend their time on the tv or online platforms, thus they readily absorb poor information and knowledge from it.
The text lastly insists that pure talented writers are ignored by the audience so they aren't sponsored by investors. The speaker in the lecture counters these indications by asserting that it is also the author's mistake because most of the modern writers' productions are incomprehensible to ordinary people so there is no reason to encourage them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...ality, in other words, it may encourage to learn from the culture through listening to a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...usic and watching an exceptional movie. these claims refute the writers implications ...
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Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ers are ignored by the audience so they arent sponsored by investors. The speaker in ...
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Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stake because most of the modern writers productions are incomprehensible to ordi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, may, nonetheless, so, thus, while, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30943396226 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84054457547 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1329986383 49.2860985944 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.333333333 110.228320801 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 21.698381199 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06452816374 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206252577944 0.272083759551 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764733872178 0.0996497079465 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630136363038 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112124918224 0.162205337803 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526349528739 0.0443174109184 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.3589403974 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.8541721854 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.0289183223 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.42419426049 117% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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