The reading passage and the lecture discuss this fascinating topic, commercial fossil collector, buying and selling fossils is have benefits or disadvantages. The article claims that commercial fossil collector sold fossils to privet ownership for more money are bad for development in science and the general public, to support he provides three reasons for this. The lecture cast has serious doubt above the claim made in the article, according to the professor its have more benefits the negative one it is good for science and public.
First of all, The author of the passage said that fossil collectors sold to the private collectors and public are not allowed to view their collection this can lead to public uninterest for fossil which is bad. This point is challenged by the professor she states that selling fossils to the commercial market is benefit people because they do lots of exploration which in result fossil available for purchases, so the low-level public institution can buy it.
Secondly, The reading passage states that commercial fossil collectors sell to private collectors which lead to scientists not get access to important fossil thereby miss out on potentially crucial discoveries about extinct life forms. This point rebuts by the professor she states that before selling the fossils it need to scientifically identify and this done by details examination and series of test by scientists so even if fossil goes to private collectors they first check by scientists in this way scientists do not miss any important information.
Finally, The article states that commercial fossil collectors are untrained or uninterested in carrying out the careful fieldwork and documentation that reveal the most about animal life in the past. The lecture states that even though commercial fossil collectors destroy some of the valuable information but we get some information because of University cannot afford more fossil collectors so there will be some side which not discover so it better to have some information with commercial fossil collectors than not discover fossil.
In summary, while both reading passage and lecture puts some interesting fact about commercial fossil collector but significant amount of fact support that there is no clear reason that commercial fossil collector is less benefit for scientist and general public Therefore reading passage failed to justify.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX
Message: Use simply 'public'.
... bad for development in science and the general public, to support he provides three reasons f...
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ort he provides three reasons for this. The lecture cast has serious doubt above th...
Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE
Message: Simply use 'some'.
...gh commercial fossil collectors destroy some of the valuable information but we get some in...
Line 4, column 445, Rule ID: IT_VBZ
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...l be some side which not discover so it better to have some information with commercia...
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX
Message: Use simply 'public'.
...ector is less benefit for scientist and general public Therefore reading passage failed to jus...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1373.03311258 148% => OK
No of words: 378.0 270.72406181 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37301587302 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75940129601 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473544973545 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 419.366225166 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 21.2450331126 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3337172272 49.2860985944 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 203.1 110.228320801 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8 21.698381199 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.586774211196 0.272083759551 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.294480888419 0.0996497079465 296% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909478311068 0.0662205650399 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.372132056051 0.162205337803 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452449723903 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.3589403974 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 53.8541721854 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.0289183223 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.498013245 160% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.