In the given sets of materials, the main topic is the examination of causes which resulted declining in the bird's population. While the author has focused on the effects of growth in population and its consequences as main reasons, the speaker in the follow-up material cast doubt on those points by providing justifications and examples.
The first point mentioned in the article is that due to the fast pace of human population, birds' natural environment destroyed in vast scale. However, this was questioned by the lecturer as she stated that urban growing might cause diminishing some birds' population but based on realistic observation other species population has increased.
Moreover, according to the essay, since agriculture land had to be developed to meet the growing population needs, the birds' habitat devastated more and more. Nonetheless, the professor asserted that advent of new crops was liable for feeding the growing human population not extending the agriculture lands.
Last but not least, the writer has mentioned that the presence and widespread of the pesticide, as an inevitable part of having more crops, affected the bird's food chain or their reproduction process. Conversely, according to the lecturer, not only the less amount of toxic but also flourishing crop pest-residence have gradually addressed these aftermaths.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
... causes which resulted declining in the birds population. While the author has focuse...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...an growing might cause diminishing some birds population but based on realistic obser...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
... meet the growing population needs, the birds habitat devastated more and more. Nonet...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...part of having more crops, affected the birds food chain or their reproduction proces...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25974025974 0.261695866417 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.181818181818 0.158904122519 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0723426182421 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047619047619 0.0435111971325 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.012987012987 0.0277247811725 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125541125541 0.128828473217 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0995670995671 0.0370669169778 269% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.98803737375 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021645021645 0.0208969081088 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.125541125541 0.128158765124 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.004329004329 0.0158828679856 27% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.004329004329 0.0114777025283 38% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1360.0 1645.83664459 83% => OK
No of words: 210.0 271.125827815 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.47619047619 6.08160592843 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.04852973271 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385714285714 0.374372842146 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309523809524 0.287516216867 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.257142857143 0.187439937562 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.214285714286 0.113142543107 189% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 2.98803737375 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647619047619 0.539623497131 120% => OK
Word variations: 68.4492788862 53.8517498576 127% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 26.25 21.7502111507 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5370530013 49.3711431718 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.0 132.220823453 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 21.7502111507 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.878197800319 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.39072847682 118% => OK
Readability: 57.2023809524 50.5018328374 113% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.90840788429 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.575434877259 0.549887131256 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.155901340658 0.142949733639 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0620164042317 0.0787303798458 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.749539596763 0.631733273073 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.065871436472 0.139662658121 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.3156941548 0.266732575781 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879682859728 0.103435571967 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383606434961 0.414875509568 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0224365351371 0.0530846634433 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.411096090673 0.40443939384 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360707253897 0.0528353158467 68% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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