The passage is about the extinction of Torreya Taxifoha tress.The writer has mentioned some ways to preserve them but as per the speaker its is in accurate for what happened in real.
First,writer has mentioned that for the survival of Torreya Taxifoha some locations should be reestablish.This tree can mostly survive in micro climate areas where there is favourable climate for them.Scientists should also plant their seed in coldest and dampest areas of micro climate.But speaker is not satisfied with his statement because due to global warming the climate was affected.Lands were becoming dry and it will be unfavourable for Torreya to survive.
Second,writer has mentioned that if the torreya is move to the another location it will help them to survive but speakers has contradicted the point by giving example of black lotus tree which has destroyed the other small trees when its location was changed.Like as the black lotus tree torreya may also affect the other plants in the areas due to its thrived population.
Third,writer states that by preserving Torreya Tress in research centre also we can preserve them.By conducting research on Torreya by scientists also it can be preserved.But spekers argues that it is impossible to preserve such trees in smaller areas because it required larger area for its growth and diseases resistance.This is another point where experienced contradicted theroy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he extinction of Torreya Taxifoha tress.The writer has mentioned some ways to prese...
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...rate for what happened in real. First,writer has mentioned that for the survival of ...
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...rreya Taxifoha some locations should be reestablish.This tree can mostly survive in micro c...
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...ha some locations should be reestablish.This tree can mostly survive in micro climat...
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...re there is favourable climate for them.Scientists should also plant their seed in coldest...
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...dest and dampest areas of micro climate.But speaker is not satisfied with his state...
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...global warming the climate was affected.Lands were becoming dry and it will be unfavo...
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...urable for Torreya to survive. Second,writer has mentioned that if the torreya is mo...
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...all trees when its location was changed.Like as the black lotus tree torreya may als...
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... due to its thrived population. Third,writer states that by preserving Torreya Tress...
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...search centre also we can preserve them.By conducting research on Torreya by scien...
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... by scientists also it can be preserved.But spekers argues that it is impossible to...
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... for its growth and diseases resistance.This is another point where experienced cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 224.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33035714286 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01694565694 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549107142857 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 21.2450331126 264% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.707521424 49.2860985944 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 298.5 110.228320801 271% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 21.698381199 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06452816374 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354766052172 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21837872693 0.0996497079465 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462629014965 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21837872693 0.162205337803 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462629014965 0.0443174109184 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 13.3589403974 237% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 53.8541721854 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.0289183223 228% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.42419426049 125% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.7273730684 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.498013245 232% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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