TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

When people speaks the truth it is the most important consideration to keep relationship with the people.I agree with the statement because of some reasons which i will explore in the following paragraph.

Well,telling truth means speaking fact or real what happened.When somebody makes mistake and if he/she lie it then he/she may be in trouble in some days.He/she always have to fear whether the truth may come at the moment.But if they surrender and tell the fact about any situation then he/she may be forgiven for the mistakes or will be excused.When somebody lied there may be great chance of breaking of relationship.Those who lie people cant keep faith on them in any work and words which makes lyer feel bad.But telling truth is best infront of both people and God.Those who lie are the sinners so it is better to tell truth rather then became a sinner.Event the situation is critical or embarrassing its result will be fruit.

These are my opinion towards the statement and i fell telling truth is the best way to be faithful and loyal.When we express anything which is in our heart and mind without lying even it is bitter to some extent its result will be good and testy.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When people speaks the truth it is the most ...
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Suggestion: I
...on to keep relationship with the people.I agree with the statement because of som...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...statement because of some reasons which i will explore in the following paragraph...
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...lore in the following paragraph. Well,telling truth means speaking fact or real what ...
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Suggestion: When
...ans speaking fact or real what happened.When somebody makes mistake and if he/she li...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'lies'.
Suggestion: lies
...en somebody makes mistake and if he/she lie it then he/she may be in trouble in som...
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...n he/she may be in trouble in some days.He/she always have to fear whether the tr...
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Suggestion: has
...e in trouble in some days.He/she always have to fear whether the truth may come at ...
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...ouble in some days.He/she always have to fear whether the truth may come at the m...
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...hether the truth may come at the moment.But if they surrender and tell the fact abo...
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Suggestion: When
...ven for the mistakes or will be excused.When somebody lied there may be great chance...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ven for the mistakes or will be excused.When somebody lied there may be great chance...
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...reat chance of breaking of relationship.There may be ego between two people.Those who...
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Suggestion: Those
...hip.There may be ego between two people.Those who lie people cant keep faith on them ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...between two people.Those who lie people cant keep faith on them in any work and word...
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...m in any work and words which makes lyer feel bad.But telling truth is best infro...
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...rk and words which makes lyer feel bad.But telling truth is best infront of both p...
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Suggestion: Those
... is best infront of both people and God.Those who lie are the sinners so it is better...
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...rs so it is better to tell truth rather then became a sinner.Event the situation is ...
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... tell truth rather then became a sinner.Event the situation is critical or embarrassi...
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...re my opinion towards the statement and i fell telling truth is the best way to b...
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Suggestion: When
...s the best way to be faithful and loyal.When we express anything which is in our hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 213.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76525821596 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76386695116 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 618.680645161 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.1344086022 353% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 256.075943597 48.9658058833 523% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 338.333333333 100.406767564 337% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.0 20.6045352989 345% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157837337763 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146338237192 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111563621208 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146338237192 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111563621208 0.0645574589148 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.5 11.7677419355 310% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 58.1214874552 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 10.1575268817 282% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.57 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.0537634409 302% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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