TPO-21 - Integrated Writing Task Genetic modification, a process used to change an organism’s genes and hence its characteristics, is now being used to improve trees through genetic modification. It is possible to create trees that produce more fruit, g

Essay topics:

TPO-21 - Integrated Writing Task Genetic modification, a process used to change an organism’s genes and hence its characteristics, is now being used to improve trees through genetic modification. It is possible to create trees that produce more fruit, g

The passage discusses that by using genetic modification and changing the charasteristics of trees they can create productive trees. In this way, trees produce more fruit, grow faster, and resist in hard conditions. The reading provides three benefits for genetic modification. In contrast, the professor states there are problems in this method. As a result, she rejects all these three benefits.
First, the passage claims that genetically modified trees are hardier tan natural trees. So, they can survive more in catastrophic situations compared to natural trees. In spite of this idea, the professor describes that always there is a possibility that a certain condition like climate change, emerging new pests and insects cause damage in genetically modified trees because these trees are not resistant to all different factors and conditions. Thus, their survival is not practical.
Second, the article asserts by using genetically modified trees they can have more economically benefits. If they change trees genetically ttees will grow faster and will give greater yeild of trees. However, the professor rejects this idea by stating that there are some hidden costs that farmers should pay. For example, everytime they cultivate their products and they want plant again, they have to pay to responsible companies that provide genetically modified seeds. As you can see, these cost can be too much for farmers.
Third, the reading contends the use of genetically modified trees can prevent over exploitation of wild trees. While the professor says that most of the time natural trees have to compete with genetically modified trees in abtaining water, nutrients and even sun light. Genetically modified trees designed to absorb nutrients and water quickly in comparison with natural trees. In this way, they can grow fast and they can consum most of the resources. As a result, natural trees cannot survive. This event can be effective in companies situations and their demand for wood.

Votes
Average: 7.5 (1 vote)
Essay Categories
Essays by the user:

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third, thus, while, for example, in contrast, as a result, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 314.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35987261146 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66645726016 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519108280255 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.4981074432 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.15 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.554762901198 0.272083759551 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176973047644 0.0996497079465 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108168744787 0.0662205650399 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373443936738 0.162205337803 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325757738145 0.0443174109184 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.