tpo 21
drug delivery
On the other hand, the effect of the inter-tissue fluid flow also increases as the nanoparticles become larger. As shown in Figures 8 and 9, at the entrance of the capillary, since the pressure inside the capillary is higher than that in the tissue, the interstitial fluid flows from the capillary to the tissue. but at the end of the capillary, the pressure inside capillary is lower than tissue, causing the interstitial fluid flows from the tissue to the capillary. consequently, the penetration and distribution of nanoparticles is effected by this fluid flow. also, according to Fig. 4, larger nanoparticles are more sensitive to convection (interstitial flow), resulting in more intense non-uniform distribution of larger nanoparticles in comparison to more uniform distribution of smaller nanoparticles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...flows from the capillary to the tissue. but at the end of the capillary, the pressu...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...flows from the tissue to the capillary. consequently, the penetration and distribution of na...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...rticles is effected by this fluid flow. also, according to Fig. 4, larger nanopartic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 22.412803532 9% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 1373.03311258 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 125.0 270.72406181 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.488 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 4.04702891845 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42128864611 2.5805825403 133% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 145.348785872 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 419.366225166 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3234917322 49.2860985944 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0252110747903 0.272083759551 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0123683147061 0.0996497079465 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0084281040555 0.0662205650399 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0252110747903 0.162205337803 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.8541721854 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.0289183223 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 63.6247240618 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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