Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often viewed as a bad quality for a person to have, but, in fact, it is a good quality for a person to have.
Decisions are vital parts of person’s life. Individuals make several serious decisions from childhood to adulthood. Some people believe that spending too much time to decide is a bad trait, while others disagree completely. In my view, it is good disposition to think and expend a lot of time to make an crucial decision for two important reasons which I will elaborate in following paragraphs.
First and foremost, allocating enough time to decide help people to examine all aspect thoroughly. In difficult situations, it is so hard to choose the best decision right away because individuals may omit some tiny elements which lead to big mistakes. For example, when I was at university, I needed to have a advanced lap-top. However, my father did not have enough money to buy it, so I did not spend to much time to look for the best one. One day, when I was asleep, he wake me up to go to a lap-top rashly due to the fact he borrowed money from his friend. When we went to store to purchase it, I was so confused which one is excellent. As result, I decided to buy it immediately without any examination. Unfortunately, it was not helpful for me to complete my projects although we pay about twenty thousand dollars. This experience shows me, if people have to make a rush decision, they may make a serious errors.
Second, making good decision by spending a lot of time can be beneficial for persons to progress safely. When they make several mistakes, they have to expend too much time to solve them instead of going forward. Hence, it is good characteristics that they thinks a lot before making any fundamental decision. For instance, when I was at high school, I liked to be an engineer. I did not search and ask about which major is good for me owing to my dream to a mechanical engineer. During second year of high school, I selected math and physics major. I was so shock when I noticed I had to study so much algebra in this major. As result, I felt upset since it was so hard to learn. I decided to change my major to science major without any perspective. So, it contained more complicated and difficult than math as I should study biology. Unfortunately, I abandon school forever despite my dream. As you can see, If people scrutiny their decision, they can progress better.
In conclusion, people should think so much before making any decision. Spending time to decide not only can help them to progress but also prevent to make a mistake. All individuals should get advice from their parents to make a significant decisions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... think and expend a lot of time to make an crucial decision for two important reas...
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Line 2, column 309, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n I was at university, I needed to have a advanced lap-top. However, my father di...
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Line 2, column 404, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ugh money to buy it, so I did not spend to much time to look for the best one. One...
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Line 2, column 474, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wakes'.
Suggestion: wakes
...est one. One day, when I was asleep, he wake me up to go to a lap-top rashly due to ...
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Line 2, column 727, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thout any examination. Unfortunately, it was not helpful for me to complete my pr...
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Line 2, column 913, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'error'?
Suggestion: error
... rush decision, they may make a serious errors. Second, making good decision by spend...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...e, it is good characteristics that they thinks a lot before making any fundamental dec...
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Line 4, column 241, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'decision'?
Suggestion: decision
...rom their parents to make a significant decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64966740576 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7379650874 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50110864745 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4442616953 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8928571429 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1071428571 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249946022568 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650405492284 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076083074026 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164330216487 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803926126724 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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