TPO 23 – Integrated

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TPO 23 – Integrated

Both the reading and the lecture discuss about reasons of decreasing the population of the yellow cedar trees. The reading points up three theories in order to explain this declination. However, the lecture casts a shadow of doubt about what the author mentions and presents some evidences to refute them all.

First of all, in the reading passage, the author points out that beetle larvae is responsible for decreasing the number of these kinds of tree. In contrast, the lecture brings up the idea that the yellow cedar tree emitted a poisonous or unhealthy material which could kill beetle. As a result, the larvae suffered from eating the wood. Therefore, this declination could not be created by insects.

Secondly, it was proved that, on the contrary the passage, declination accrued in the both places of Island and mainland but there are not any brown beers in the Island. Hence, how beers could reduce the size of the yellow cedar.

Finally, the lecture argues that this reduction has happened in the lower attitude places with higher temperatures and higher attitude places with lower temperatures. Whereas, evidence show that the rate of this reduction in the lower attitudes is more than higher ones. Therefore, how freezing root is responsible for this extinction. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.

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beetle larvae is responsible for decreasing the number of these kinds of tree
beetle larvae is responsible for the number decreasing of these kinds of trees

on the contrary the passage
on the contrary to the passage

but there are not any brown beers in the Island
but there are no any brown beers in the Island

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Words: 217 250

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 217 250
No. of Characters: 1085 1200
No. of Different Words: 122 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.2
Average Word Length: 5 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.464 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.194 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.769 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.333 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.559 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4