The article and the lecture are both discussed the advanced findings in the fossil record of the Danuser leg bone. The article states that t Rex leg bone revealed the advanced information about the bone content and they provide three reasons to support. However, the professor explained that it is not true just a imaginary information and he refutes the each of the author's opinion.
First, the passage avers that the inner part of the bone reveals the branching system of the blood vessels in the bone. The professor says that it is not the remainings of the blood compounds. He explained that once the tissue is dead the bacteria would be colonized and release the soft and most organic residue in the bone and it seems like the blood channels.
Second, the article climes that microscopic studies show the spheres inside the bone tissue and it contains iron essential for blood cells. The professor contended this point by saying it is not a unique finding because identical findings are observed in other studies. He illustrated that it is not a red blood cell.
Third, the reading posits that fossil studies find the fibrinogen tissue, an essential chemicals substance for the matrix. The teacher cast a doubt on this point by saying never find the fibrinogen in any past studies. He mentioned that although it is an essential organ, it is not found in blood vessels and it is a part of the other body organ.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...ssor explained that it is not true just a imaginary information and he refutes th...
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ormation and he refutes the each of the authors opinion. First, the passage avers that...
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'chemicals'' or 'chemical's'?
Suggestion: chemicals'; chemical's
...ind the fibrinogen tissue, an essential chemicals substance for the matrix. The teacher c...
Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...d it is a part of the other body organ.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77235772358 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45888929375 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50406504065 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9066695427 49.2860985944 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06452816374 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352999969252 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129401064744 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805384766572 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209289145464 0.162205337803 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738536979796 0.0443174109184 167% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.