tpo 27
The lecture and the article are both about Little Ice age which is a period of unusual harsh climate. The author of the reading believes that this period has some causes. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He thinks that all those theories can be disproved.
First of all, the author points out that disruption of ocean streams was one of the causes of little ice age.It is mentioned that before little ice age there was an extremely warm weather , which was a reason of melting glances. For this reason, currents of golf stream were disrupted. this point is challenged by the lecturer. He says that, climate changes were spread around the world. Moreover, disruption in golf stream was cause climate changes only near North America.
Secondly, the author contends that, volcanic activities were reason of starting little ice age, because dust from volcanos blocked sunlight. The lecturer rebuts this argument. He suggests that during the little ice age there were not enough strong volcanic eruption to cover sky and prevent sunlight.
Finally, the author states that during this period there was a small number of human, so new forests appeared. The article established that trees produce carbon dioxide which made earth cooler. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that changes in climate from carbon dioxid is extremely long process. In addition, human population recovered quickly, so they proceeded to cut down trees.
In conclusion, I would like to say that there are a lot of theories of causing the little ice age, but no one of them can be unproved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s a period of unusual harsh climate. The author of the reading believes that this...
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Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ieves that this period has some causes. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...was one of the causes of little ice age.It is mentioned that before little ice age...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... age there was an extremely warm weather , which was a reason of melting glances. ...
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Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...currents of golf stream were disrupted. this point is challenged by the lecturer. He...
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Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ream was cause climate changes only near North America. Secondly, the author c...
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Line 6, column 62, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...tates that during this period there was a small number of human, so new forests appeared. The art...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 267.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98876404494 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34667973308 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0840213547 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3529411765 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42340661789 0.272083759551 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113730071678 0.0996497079465 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103529627379 0.0662205650399 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219481417749 0.162205337803 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686893352806 0.0443174109184 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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