TPO 32
The lecture and the article are both about strange noise which was heard by russian sailor during the submarines patrolling. Moreover, there were no tracks of solid moving object in this area. The author of the reading believes that there are a lot of explanations of this odd sound. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. she thinks that all those explanation can be disproved.
Firstly, the author of the reading points out that there is a high possibility that this noise was made by orca whales during their courtship ritual. this point is challenged by the lecturer. she suggests that the submarine`s locator could not detect whales because they live near the surface.
Secondly, the author of the reading contends that this wierd sound was produced by giant squid. Also, this theory explains that this object was not detected by locator, because squid has a soft body. The lecturer rebuts this argument. she supposes that this noise existed only for twenty years and then disappeared. However, giant squid lives there even now.
Finally, the article states that the another country`s submarine produced this sound. So, it is possible that the foreign submarine had some technology that allowed it to be undetected. The lecturer, on the other hand, thinks that submarine`s has another noise in contrast with this odd sound. Furthermore, submarine can not move with such a great speed which provides it to be incognito.
In conclusion, I would like to say that there are a lot of theories about origin of this strange sound, but all of them are able to be unproved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...oubt on the claims made in the article. she thinks that all those explanation can b...
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Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this explanation' or 'those explanations'?
Suggestion: this explanation; those explanations
...ade in the article. she thinks that all those explanation can be disproved. Firstly, the aut...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...a whales during their courtship ritual. this point is challenged by the lecturer. sh...
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Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...is point is challenged by the lecturer. she suggests that the submarine's loca...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ody. The lecturer rebuts this argument. she supposes that this noise existed only f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 269.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02230483271 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64607774827 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550185873606 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6326353347 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0555555556 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300101319491 0.272083759551 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946671036241 0.0996497079465 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640889598688 0.0662205650399 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169838840004 0.162205337803 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503234211026 0.0443174109184 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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