tpo 29
large numbers of dinosaur fossils have been discovered deposits on Alaska's north slope, a region that today experiences an extremely cold, arctic climate. Paleontologists have proposed that dinosaur had migrate for surviving in the winter season and expressed several arguments for support the migration hypothesis. according what professor said in the lecture, the arguments are not convincing. the first reason, dinosaurs did not have to migrate for getting food because there were some place with a warmer temperature that plants can have a good growing so dinosaurs can feed from those. the second reason, just because of edmontosaur lived in herd as results for their migration, does not mean the dinosaurs lived too and they know some animals that lived in Alaska's north slope and they survived without migration. the third reason, the juveniles of dinosaurs have not a good physical condition to make such a journey as the adult dinosaur had so this is so doubtful that they can survive in that journey.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Large
large numbers of dinosaur fossils have been d...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'migrated'.
Suggestion: migrated
...logists have proposed that dinosaur had migrate for surviving in the winter season and ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'migrated'.
Suggestion: migrated
...logists have proposed that dinosaur had migrate for surviving in the winter season and ...
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Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...t dinosaur had migrate for surviving in the winter season and expressed several arguments for sup...
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Suggestion: According
...s for support the migration hypothesis. according what professor said in the lecture, the...
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Suggestion: The
...ture, the arguments are not convincing. the first reason, dinosaurs did not have to...
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Suggestion: The
...owing so dinosaurs can feed from those. the second reason, just because of edmontos...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...pe and they survived without migration. the third reason, the juveniles of dinosaur...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pe and they survived without migration. the third reason, the juveniles of dinosaur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 30.3222958057 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 1373.03311258 62% => OK
No of words: 164.0 270.72406181 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2012195122 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.04702891845 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65329394689 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 145.348785872 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 419.366225166 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4390281265 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.166666667 110.228320801 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06452816374 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395288446398 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186387384225 0.0996497079465 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105447170368 0.0662205650399 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.395288446398 0.162205337803 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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