TPO 29-INTEGRATED TASK
In the reading passage, the author proposed three arguments for supporting the migration hypothesis of edmontosaur. however, the speaker did not agree with the statement. The speaker spoke against the arguments for three reasons as well.
First, in the reading passage, the lacking diet supporting is the major issue for edmontosaur 's survival which leads them to migrate to a warm place where to find food. however, the speaker points out the weakness of the hypothesis. The temperature in 1000 years ago was warmer than today in North Slope. It offered a suitable living condition for edmontosaur. Besides, the sunlight sustained for 24 hours in summer, which enforced the plants to grow up well during summer. Thus, they could survive during winter feeding on dead plants.
Second, the passage indicated that edmontosaurs lived in a herd which was corresponding to the habits of other modern-day migratory animals. Nevertheless, the speaker demonstrated shreds of evidence that animals living in a herd are for other purposes like protection themselves. For example, a certain kind of animal lives in a herd in the united stated does not migrate during winter and stay in the same place.
Third, the paragraph asserts that edmontosaurs were capable to migrate in a long distance to reach more hospitable regions. But, the speaker noticed that the juvenile in the group may not be able to move in long distance. Moreover, at a slow pace, the juvenile in the group also slowed down the speed of migration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...he migration hypothesis of edmontosaur. however, the speaker did not agree with the sta...
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...guments for three reasons as well. First, in the reading passage, the lacki...
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Suggestion: However
...ate to a warm place where to find food. however, the speaker points out the weakness of...
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...ing winter feeding on dead plants. Second, the passage indicated that edmon...
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...winter and stay in the same place. Third, the paragraph asserts that edmont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, third, thus, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 22.412803532 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 248.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20967741935 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73637957034 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2807155382 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1333333333 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37052055687 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108568198649 0.0996497079465 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726897735006 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198449208483 0.162205337803 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587107651224 0.0443174109184 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.