TPO 31 :quackers

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TPO 31 :quackers

In this set of materials, the article and the lecturer are discussing the topic of the cause of the quackers. However, the lecturer disagrees with the article. She thinks that the theorems mentioned in the article are questionable, offering several reasons to opposite the article.

The first reason is associated with the place that the ocra whales live. Although the article states that the ocras make the noise to attract male and the sound is similar to quackers. However, the lecturer argues that the ocras live near the surface of the ocean and the submarines can detect the ocras if the sound is caused by ocras.

Second, the lecturer refutes the article by mentioning the disappearance of the sounds. Though the article claims that the sounds were caused by giant squids which lived deep in the ocean and were hard to be detected because of their body structure, the lecturer points that the sounds have stopped in 1980 for a decade and appeared again. Since the giant squids live continually, the article's statement is not convincing.

Third, the article says that the sounds were caused by another submarine which was designed undetected. The lecturer disagrees with this idea and points that the sounds changed direction quickly and it was impossible for submarine to do that. The lecturer also mentions that the sound of the submarine’s engine is different to the quackers and the engine cannot be built that silence.

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Sentence: She thinks that the theorems mentioned in the article are questionable, offering several reasons to opposite the article.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to to and opposite

the place that the ocra whales live.
the place where the ocra whales live.

the engine cannot be built that silence.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2

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Score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 239 250
No. of Characters: 1169 1200
No. of Different Words: 114 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.932 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.891 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.407 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.42 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.444 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.65 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.179 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4