TPO 33
In the listening passage professor provides contradictory information about dinosaurs endotherms, which is according to the reading passage considerable evidence that dinosaurs we endotherms/
The first point of contrast between the passages is that while the reading text claims fossils found in polar regions so only endotherms animals maintance a tempeture well in cold enviroment, professor distutes this idea by highlighting that, these time polar region was hotter than today, and when the winter came probably these dinosaurs was migrated to the warmer region, due to fact that polar dinours not enuogh prof that dinosaur was endoterms/
Second positive ascpect from the reading passage, which is argues that, leg position and movement have a connection with endotherms, so dinosasurs leg position were tpicallys similar to endotherms animals, the speakers has a different opinion and explain that, dinasour can grow in large scale so these legs can carry huge body of animals, its not not about running or being a endotherm animals.
Final area of discussion, reding passage states that bones of endotherms usualy inculde haversian canal, these canals help the living animal grow faster, and fossilized bones of dinosaurs has bunc of these bones, speaker has another thing the say about it she talking about also ting bones which is
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w in large scale so these legs can carry huge body of animals, its not not about ...
^^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e legs can carry huge body of animals, its not not about running or being a endoth...
^^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: not
...gs can carry huge body of animals, its not not about running or being a endotherm anim...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...als, its not not about running or being a endotherm animals. Final area of disc...
^
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f discussion, reding passage states that bones of endotherms usualy inculde haver...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, well, while, another thing, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 210.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41428571429 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63947015916 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652380952381 0.540411800872 121% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 13.0662251656 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 105.0 21.2450331126 494% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 373.0 49.2860985944 757% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 568.5 110.228320801 516% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 105.0 21.698381199 484% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.0 7.06452816374 495% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0484416678626 0.272083759551 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327033552311 0.0996497079465 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195371448767 0.0662205650399 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0265569178106 0.162205337803 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195205979682 0.0443174109184 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 56.6 13.3589403974 424% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -43.56 53.8541721854 -81% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.4 11.0289183223 412% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.2367328918 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.96 8.42419426049 166% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 10.7273730684 513% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 44.0 10.498013245 419% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 11.2008830022 509% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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