A person should never make an important decision alone.
In our daily life we make a lot of decision, only critical ones we call important decisions. I can't agree or disagree with this statetment because sitiuation is so important to take this decision, so the term "never" in this sentece ı can't join, ı will try to explain my idea with several reason.
First of all, when we are taking a decision stiation so important, ıf we have a limited time to take a decision, what were are gonna do ? Are we gonna call our family and disscus before we going to give our decision ? ı can create a imaginary thing, there is bomb in front of you and its only 10 second left, there is two color red cable , or blue ıf cut blue one you will safe people, if yo dont cut any cable it will explode anyway. This example maybe inaccurate but let me give my own experience, couple years ago my mother was so sick, and the doctor came to and told me ıf she stay here we can loose her, ıf you carry her in another hospital they can safe her life, but while she travel she can also die, and he gave me 5 min to think,ı made my decision ı called the ambulance, after 6 week my mom became a normal. Sometimes you dont have time to discuss for situation so you have to pick a way and after all you can only prey for god.
Secondly, ıf you have time to make a decision, you can share the option with your family or your friends, maybe they can change your idea by showing your poor view. but you can stiil make your own decision, ın this case your by your own. No matter what they tell you or what they show you end of the they you will make this decision.
In conclusion, as I mention ın the intro, I cant agree "never" ,maybe it will be a good option to asked and take opinion about your decision, but desicion is decision no matter what consequences will come with it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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In our daily life we make a lot of decis...
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...cal ones we call important decisions. I cant agree or disagree with this statetment ...
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...s so important to take this decision, so the term 'never' in this sent...
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...tant to take this decision, so the term 'never' in this sentece ı cant...
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...oin, ı will try to explain my idea with several reason. First of all, when we are taking a...
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...econd left, there is two color red cable , or blue ıf cut blue one you will safe p...
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...ut blue one you will safe people, if yo dont cut any cable it will explode anyway. ...
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...ll safe people, if yo dont cut any cable it will explode anyway. This example may...
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...d the doctor came to and told me ıf she stay here we can loose her, ıf you carry her...
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... also die, and he gave me 5 min to think,ı made my decision ı called the ambulance...
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...ecision ı called the ambulance, after 6 week my mom became a normal. Sometimes you d...
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...he intro, I cant agree 'never' ,maybe it will be a good option to asked ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, after all, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24068767908 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3575574693 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527220630372 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.32908793 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.545454545 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7272727273 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.066417828993 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334556655695 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025302140749 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454678975443 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166313525926 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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