TPO-33 - Integrated Writing Task

The reading and the lecture are both about the purpose of existence of carves stones that were found in different areas of Scotland. The author in the text provides three theories about the usage of those carved stones. On the other hand, the professor in the lecture refuses each theory by stating some rational explanations.
First of all, the author mentions that they could be used as a hunting or fighting devices because there were found some holes or grooves on the surface of the stones. So, they were wrapped by strings to be used. The professor in the lecture challenges the idea by asserting that if they were used to be a hunting or fighting device they must be broken down and found in species. However, they are preserved well with no flake or species of the whole stones.
Secondly, the author in the lecture provides a theory which mentions that because all of the stones were found with the same diameter -70 mm- they must be used for measurement and weighing food or anything measurable. Whereas, the instructor claims that it is OK if their diameter is identical but each carved stones were made of different types of stone with different density so their weight is not the same to be used as a measurement device.
Finally, it is mentioned in the text that due to their adornments on the surface, they must be used for social purposes. On the contrast, the lecturer posits that some of the have intricated patterns of the surface however, some others are simple with no symbol. Therefore, they could not be used for social statues. Furthermore, she added that if they were used in this issue the famous people with had passed away must had this stones on their graves and stones of grave. So, these carved stones were not used in this purpose.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to being'.
Suggestion: used to being
...the idea by asserting that if they were used to be a hunting or fighting device they must ...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...es a theory which mentions that because all of the stones were found with the same diamete...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the contrast, the lecturer posits that some of the have intricated patterns of the surface...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.4613686534 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66346153846 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3693486172 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455128205128 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3663762127 49.2860985944 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372037877885 0.272083759551 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142259225831 0.0996497079465 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652233311308 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238140042837 0.162205337803 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541416511183 0.0443174109184 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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