TPO 4
The article states that dinisaurs were endotherms and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that there are problems with this argument and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that the dinosaur fossils that have been found in polar regions shows that dinosaurs were endotherms. The professor refutes this point by saying that in their times polar regions were warmer than other areas and it migh that dinosaurs migrate to polar regions. So, finding their fossils there can't prove that dinosaurs were endotherms.
Second, the article posits that dinosaurs leg position and movement is similar to other endotherms. The professor explains that there is an other explaination for this similarity. According to the professor, this leg position support more weight for dinosaurs. Benig larg is an advantage for them.
Finally, the reading says that dinosaurs bone stucture is an other support for its theory. The professor opposes this point by saying that dinosaurs had different growth rate. In some times they grow fast and sometimes grow slowly and may not grow. This variety of growth speed is responsible for this bone structure and it is not one the endotherms animals features.
there is an other explaination
there is another explaination
this leg position support more weight
this leg position supports more weight
is an other support
is another support
had different growth rate.
had different growth rates.
Sentence: Second, the article posits that dinosaurs leg position and movement is similar to other endotherms.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to dinosaurs and leg
Sentence: Finally, the reading says that dinosaurs bone stucture is an other support for its theory.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to dinosaurs and bone
Sentence: This variety of growth speed is responsible for this bone structure and it is not one the endotherms animals features.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to animals and features
Sentence: The professor refutes this point by saying that in their times polar regions were warmer than other areas and it migh that dinosaurs migrate to polar regions.
Error: migh Suggestion: might
Sentence: The professor explains that there is an other explaination for this similarity.
Error: explaination Suggestion: explanation
Sentence: Benig larg is an advantage for them.
Error: larg Suggestion: large
Sentence: Finally, the reading says that dinosaurs bone stucture is an other support for its theory.
Error: stucture Suggestion: structure
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 197 250
No. of Characters: 1020 1200
No. of Different Words: 102 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.746 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.178 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.379 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.881 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.376 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.597 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4