tpo 40
The lecture and article are both about whether of present life in venus or not. the Teacher says that the human presence could be possible with some solution. However, the reading opposes these solutions.
Firstly, the issue of venus' surface pressure. The lecturer states that the spacecraft could stay flouting at 50 kilometers high. The venous pressure is equal to earth pressure at this high. Moreover, there is no danger for spacecraft at this high. Although, the reading disagrees with this concept. As a result, the first proposal is overturned by the author
Secondly, the trouble of presence water on Venus surface. The teacher mentions that Venus does not have water and oxygen but it has other elements, like carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid. The spacecraft residents could use these elements to produce water and oxygen by chemical reaction. On the other hand, the reading asserts that life is impossible in the venus because there is no water and oxygen. Consequently, the second point is debuted by reading
Finally, the issue of reaching sunlight to the venus' surface. The professor says that the sunlight could reach to the surface of venus but it is very little. The cloud is not too thick like what mentions in the reading. Moreover, the spacecraft could use the sunlight, Which reflects from clouds and produce electricity. producing electricity is impossible in venus's surface. In other ways, the article argues this idea. it says that the clouds do not allow for sunlight to pass to the venus land. that why the third point of the author is not valid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
...hether of present life in venus or not. the Teacher says that the human presence co...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... no danger for spacecraft at this high. Although, the reading disagrees with this concep...
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Suggestion: Producing
...ts from clouds and produce electricity. producing electricity is impossible in venuss sur...
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Suggestion: It
...her ways, the article argues this idea. it says that the clouds do not allow for s...
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Suggestion: That
...for sunlight to pass to the venus land. that why the third point of the author is no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06818181818 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44960396248 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503787878788 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 18.0 8.23620309051 219% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4857859291 49.2860985944 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.9 110.228320801 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 21.698381199 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36046802299 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985074851265 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05780989771 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198367020501 0.162205337803 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650174061263 0.0443174109184 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.8541721854 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.7273730684 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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