TPO 41

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TPO 41

First of all, the reading passage claims that regulation exist. On the other hand, the professor refutes this idea and she say that for example, require company to use liner are not sufficient , because liner used when only new landfill and new pound that it is not sufficient and companies are not add liner. it is Several Significant damage, the harmful chemical from coal ash leaked the ground water and contaminated drinking water.

Second, the text suggest that concern about recycling coal ash, in controversy, the speaker reject this information and she states that create strict rules for storing and handling coal ash is not essential. customer stop recycle rules product. other damage like mercury, mercury is a fairly material that storing rules and handling recycle is long time and safely recycle 5o years. So, unlikely customers buy recycle coal ash.

Third, the passage suggested that increased cost, in contrast, the professor refutes this statement and she explains that according to analyses power companies have revenue about 50 million dollar that is a lot of money and increase the price electricity bill is only 1 percent that not big price

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... of all, the reading passage claims that regulation exist. On the other hand, the...
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Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...that for example, require company to use liner are not sufficient , because liner...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...company to use liner are not sufficient , because liner used when only new landf...
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Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ufficient , because liner used when only new landfill and new pound that it is no...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'added'.
Suggestion: added
...is not sufficient and companies are not add liner. it is Several Significant damage...
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Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: It
...icient and companies are not add liner. it is Several Significant damage, the har...
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Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...liner. it is Several Significant damage, the harmful chemical from coal ash leake...
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Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...armful chemical from coal ash leaked the ground water and contaminated drinking...
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Line 1, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...l from coal ash leaked the ground water and contaminated drinking water. ...
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Line 1, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...aked the ground water and contaminated drinking water. Second, the...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... and contaminated drinking water. Second, the text suggest that concern a...
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ted drinking water. Second, the text suggest that concern about recy...
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Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Customer
...nd handling coal ash is not essential. customer stop recycle rules product. other damag...
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Line 9, column 248, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Other
.... customer stop recycle rules product. other damage like mercury, mercury is a fair...
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Line 9, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...stop recycle rules product. other damage like mercury, mercury is a fairly materi...
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Line 9, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ke mercury, mercury is a fairly material that storing rules and handling recycle ...
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Line 9, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...handling recycle is long time and safely recycle 5o years. So, unlikely customers...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ly customers buy recycle coal ash. Third, the passage suggested that incre...
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Line 17, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... Third, the passage suggested that increased cost, in contrast, the pr...
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Line 17, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... refutes this statement and she explains that according to analyses power compan...
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Line 17, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...es this statement and she explains that according to analyses power companies h...
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Line 17, column 139, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
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Suggestion: analyse
...nt and she explains that according to analyses power companies have revenue about 50 ...
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Line 17, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...t according to analyses power companies have revenue about 50 million dollar tha...
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Line 17, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... and increase the price electricity bill is only 1 percent that not big price
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Line 17, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...electricity bill is only 1 percent that not big price
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, for example, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 30.3222958057 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 190.0 270.72406181 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23157894737 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45783498729 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.1503526852 49.2860985944 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06452816374 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 4.19205298013 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445328580847 0.272083759551 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170691090216 0.0996497079465 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095879660251 0.0662205650399 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24614723965 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121582685899 0.0443174109184 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.3589403974 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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