TPO 41- Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash, a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals. Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harmful chemicals may be doing to the environment and suggest that the United States government should create new, much stricter regulations for handling and storing coal ash.
However, representatives of power companies take the opposite view: they argue that new regulations are unnecessary and might actually have negative consequences. They use the following arguments to support their position.
the article states that new and srtict rules for control the waste product of coal, which called coal ash, in necessary, on the other hand, power companies which produce coal ash, disagree with these new rules and provides three reasons for support their opinion. However, the professer explains that new and strict rules must be adapted and obeyed by them, and refutes each of the authour's reasons.
first, the reading claims that the regulation rule already intoduced such as liner-material that used in the coal ash disposal pools. the professor opposes this point by saying that liner-material is used for new pools not for old pools. she also states that, leaking the ash cause serious damage to the environment and contaminating the soil. new and strict role muse be designed and obeyed by power companies as well as old rules.
second, the article posits that new and srtict rules may discourage companies for recycleing the ash. in contrst, the professor gives an example of recycleing of Mercuty, dangerous material, when compaies recycle Mercury successfully there were not only few concerns about this material, but also people and companies be free to using and bying recycled Mercury.
third, the reading says that new and srtict rules leading to increase cost of handeling and managing the ash. the professor casts doubt on this point and explains that it is well worth to protect our environment when the prices of handeling and managing the ash even increased. according to the professor, companies which implement these rules which may recqire huge amount of money, can increase the cost of the electecity and sold it with such as one percent much cost to consumer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, second, so, third, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 279.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11827956989 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50151994494 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534050179211 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9203517406 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.818181818 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471215731697 0.272083759551 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17234298271 0.0996497079465 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108365066089 0.0662205650399 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279935038896 0.162205337803 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974365289323 0.0443174109184 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.