Based on the reading material, the author stated that there are 3 viable reasons for representatives of power companies, who take a opposite view regarding creating strict regulations for handeling and storing coal ash. However, the professor finds this idea bereft of sufficient reasoning and cites some ideas to the contrary.
Initially, the author argued that there are already exist some effective environmental regulations. However, the lecturer refuted this idea by stating that the current regulations are not sufficient at all owing to the fact that these regulations are only for new ponds or landfills. Old disposal sites have no regulations and these sites will contaminate the groundwater. So, there must be new strict regulations for new ponds as well as old sites.
Another point mentioned by the writer of the reading passage was that by adopting new regulations, consumers may become concerned that recycled coal ash products are too dangerous and avoid to buy them. That being said, the professor repudiated this one too by clarifying that this doesn't mean that consumers won't buy the recycled products. To make it clear, the professor brought up an example of mercury. She said that this product is producing from very dangerous coal ash, whereas people are inclined to buy it even more owing to the fact that this recycled product has no harmful effects.
The final point discussed in the reading passage was that these strict new regulations will increase the cost of power companies, perhaps as much as ten times the current costs and they have to increase the price of electricity. Yet again, the lecturer criticized this idea. She said that the result of these regulations is worthy. She stated that although this project will have approximately 50 billions dollars cost, the price of electricity will be increased only for 1%, which is not too much for general public.
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- TPO-40 - Independent Writing Task Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 73
- TPO 39 - integrated writing 3
- TPO-46 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and exam 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...sentatives of power companies, who take a opposite view regarding creating strict...
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid buying'.
Suggestion: avoid buying
...coal ash products are too dangerous and avoid to buy them. That being said, the professor re...
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...ed this one too by clarifying that this doesnt mean that consumers wont buy the recycl...
Line 4, column 502, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX
Message: Use simply 'public'.
... only for 1%, which is not too much for general public.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, well, whereas, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 310.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12258064516 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71501011356 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538709677419 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.449979984 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38165030141 0.272083759551 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119235059135 0.0996497079465 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937525773592 0.0662205650399 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219071189812 0.162205337803 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206135357601 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.