TPO 44

Essay topics:

TPO 44

The reading claims that the coins which have been founded in the state of Maine are fake and someone want to mislead public. Also there is not any historical evidences to prove this matter and provides three reasons to support its approach. However, the lecturer finds all ideas which have been mentioned by reading dubious and presents some evidences to refute them all.

At the first place, the author argues that there is long distance between discovered place and settlements of Norse. They lived in far eastern Canada and the site is far than thousand kilometers. In contrast, the speaker brings up the idea that there are many other objects that have been founded far away their settlement. There are reasonable historical evidences that show they travelled across North America and they could reach far distance, but they did not bring back them.

Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that coins have been discovered only in this site and archaeologists cannot find any coin at other Canadian sites. So it can prove that Norse did not bring any coins from Europe. On the contrary, the professor dismisses this issue due to the fact that it is not necessary find coins in other sites. The Norse did not have a permanent settlement and when they came back to Europe, they would not pack their coins and might forget to take back all of their coins.

Finally, the passage asserts that they could not trade with these coins by Native American. Because the native American could not understand that the coins are valuable at that time and did not assume them as money. Conversely, the speaker underlines the fact that it is true that the Norse did not use the coins as money, but it could attract the Native North American. The silver coins could have appealing and beauty. The Native American had other jewelry and the Norse could trade with them by these coins because they are also attractive and wonderful.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...the state of Maine are fake and someone want to mislead public. Also there is not an...
^^^^
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ake and someone want to mislead public. Also there is not any historical evidences t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...eastern Canada and the site is far than thousand kilometers. In contrast, the speaker br...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, so, in contrast, it is true, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 331.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85196374622 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26508748125 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486404833837 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9136536068 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.543931942599 0.272083759551 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180351717342 0.0996497079465 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695292273126 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293992558236 0.162205337803 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698639682552 0.0443174109184 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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