The article states that an European silver coin is discovered at a Native American archaelogical site in the state of Maine in united state and provides three reason to point out that this coin does not have any historical evidence. However, the professor explains none of these reasons are convincing and refutes them one by one.
To begin with, because of the great distance between the Maine site and Norse settlements, this coin does not have any relation with the settlements. As the reading claims, is refuted by the professor . He asserts that large distance is not firm evidence since Europeans are in favor of traveling long distance and bringing new stuffs.
In addition, according to the essay, no more coins have been discovered and this propose that Norse did not bring any silver coins to North American settlements. Nevertheless, professor argues that North American packed up all silver coins and use them when they travel to Europe.
Finally, based on author's opinion, North Americans do not recognize silver coin as money and it is useless stuff amoung them. On the contrary, the professor states that North Americans like jewerlies and these coins are mading from silver and are beautiful, moreover, they could use these coins for traiding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
The article states that an European silver coin is discovered at a...
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
...ding claims, is refuted by the professor . He asserts that large distance is not f...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 208.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09615384615 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54993849049 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4194634878 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.777777778 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06452816374 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528166943801 0.272083759551 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206870750813 0.0996497079465 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146910773217 0.0662205650399 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319610860453 0.162205337803 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699442434577 0.0443174109184 158% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.