TPO 44 - Integrated Writing Task

According to the reading passage, there are three possible reasons to reveal that the discovered coin is not genuine historical evidence from the people who came from Europe termly Norse. While, the lecturer founds it not convincing at all and adds most of the researchers strongly believe that the coin belongs to Norse, subsequently, call it a reasonable historic evidence. Then, the professor provides that there exist three reasons supporting her idea.
First, the author asserts that the coin has found in the state of Maine in United States where is too far from the first settlement of Norse. On contrary, the professor repudiates the declaration by illustrating that Norse people did not stay in a same place, but they traveled long distance along the North America. As a result, Norse could reach far-fetched places and many of other objects have found belonging to Norse as the coin in their way of travel.
Second, the text avers that any other coin has not been found in the region. Not approving the claim, the lecturer illustrates that Norse brought silver coins with themselves to North America and took them back again to Europe. Accordingly, Norse were not necessarily permanent inhabitants in North America who packed their coins to ship to Europe after settling in North America.
Third, although the writer holds the opinion that Norse understood that silver coins were not valued among Americans. Contrarily, the speaker disapproves the assertion by demonstrating that native Americans valued the coins. To put her idea forward, she explains that the silver coins were appealing for the native Americans for their beauty. Consequently, the people liked them for their jewelries like necklaces. Therefore, the European started to trade with them using coins which reveals that the coins were available in North America, too.

Votes
Average: 9 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, second, so, then, therefore, third, while, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 298.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20805369128 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58559170146 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1939209428 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06452816374 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.545413342677 0.272083759551 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17178464467 0.0996497079465 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777903945991 0.0662205650399 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310173644202 0.162205337803 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492303528492 0.0443174109184 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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