With the fast development of technology, we can access to news more convenient than the past. Some people think that it is unnecessary for an individual to know the events which will not affect his daily life, however, I personally agree with the view that people should know about events which are happening around the world, and there are serval reasons to support that view.
First, for those people who want success in their life, it is necessary for them to have some knowledge about events which are occurring in different areas. When people know more informations about the society, they can use those informations to help them judge which area is more potential in the future. For instance, Jack Ma, after he knows that Internet is fast developing in US, he comes to the judgement that IT industry will also fast develop in China, so he decided to start a company doing Internet business in China. As a result, this company -- Alibaba becomes one of the biggest IT companies in today's world.
Furthermore, knowing what is happening around the world makes people more prepared for incoming economic crisis, so that they could save more money. Since the economy of our world is far more connected than before, it is easier for an economic crisis spread around the world. For example, the economic crisis in 2008 makes lots of banks lose all of their money, as a consequence, people can not take their money back during this situation. If people get prepared when this crisis is happing in US and withdraw their money in the bank before the crisis's influence has come, their loss will be much less.
Finally, people's life will be more enjoyable if they take a look at different funny stories around the world. Nowadays, most people have substantial pressure to suffer, to be more motivated in life, they need something makes them relax. For example, a TV program about different countries's funny stores, this kind of humour in life is benefit for people's mental health, and somehow improves people's satisfaction about their life.
In conclusion, there are lots of benefits for people to know more things happening in the world. They can not only have more opportunities to be successful, but also reduce their loss in an economic crisis and live a happier life.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24537037037 0.261695866417 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.155092592593 0.158904122519 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0787037037037 0.0723426182421 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0462962962963 0.0435111971325 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0578703703704 0.0277247811725 209% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141203703704 0.128828473217 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0370669169778 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4453098337 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025462962963 0.0208969081088 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0833333333333 0.128158765124 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0231481481481 0.0158828679856 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185185185185 0.0114777025283 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2274.0 1645.83664459 138% => OK
No of words: 389.0 271.125827815 143% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84575835476 6.08160592843 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.04852973271 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33676092545 0.374372842146 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221079691517 0.287516216867 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146529562982 0.187439937562 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0951156812339 0.113142543107 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4453098337 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 145.348785872 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508997429306 0.539623497131 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.5919418896 53.8517498576 103% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0529801325 115% => OK
Sentence length: 25.9333333333 21.7502111507 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8302005704 49.3711431718 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.6 132.220823453 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9333333333 21.7502111507 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.878197800319 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 48.041302485 50.5018328374 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.59821428571 1.90840788429 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310744598794 0.549887131256 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133224987736 0.142949733639 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0751983503362 0.0787303798458 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589886565395 0.631733273073 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109194350939 0.139662658121 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134840589551 0.266732575781 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482892452263 0.103435571967 47% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.292531122737 0.414875509568 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.033812125961 0.0530846634433 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214046918124 0.40443939384 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501263038117 0.0528353158467 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 3.49668874172 229% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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