tpo 48

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tpo 48

The passage and lecture discusses about the methods to prevent the decline in frog populations in recent years. The author states three main ways to solve this problem. The speaker casts doubts on these views raised in the passage.

Firstly, the reading claims that pesticides that are used to grow crop plants are detrimental to the frog population as it would affect their nervous system. Hence, stopping the use of pesticides can prevent this situation. The speaker challenges this statement. He explains that lack of pesticides will severely affect the crop production and those farmers will be particularly affected by it.

Secondly, proper administration of antifungal treatment for fungal growth on the frog skin,that causes dehydration and eventually its death can increase the frog population. The lecturer rebuts this by elaborating that it is not economical and practical to administer the treatment to each and every single frog. Moreover, the spread of disease from one frog to another is impossible to control.

Thirdly, the destruction of wetlands, being the natural frog habitats for reproduction by the human invasion has caused a reduction in frog breeding grounds. Therefore, according to the passage steps to preserve the natural wetlands and marsh area can help solve the problem. This viewpoint is also refuted by the speaker. He explains that the global warming is the reason for the loss of several natural habitats of animal species rather than any human intervention.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... three main ways to solve this problem. The speaker casts doubts on these views rai...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...tment for fungal growth on the frog skin,that causes dehydration and eventually its d...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40506329114 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78248848372 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611814345992 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5962041947 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362709635332 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107268186384 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916329441592 0.0662205650399 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201999872916 0.162205337803 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378358016691 0.0443174109184 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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