tpo-48
In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment
Based on the reading the world is faced with the extinction of frogs since they are benefite for the human life, several methodes have been suggested to prevent of declining frog populations.But the proffesore challanged this claim and believed that none of this ways is effective.
Pesticides are harmful for frog species which farmer use them to prevent insects from damaging their products such as crops. Therefore, estblishing ruls that prohobits the farmer from using harmful pesticide is a good way in order to prtotecting of frogs is the first way thet readig shows.. Meanwhile, the lecturer says that this strategy since causes insects damage farmland crops, agriculterers using this method hurt.
The second reason that authore debates is a fungus which causes the infection of frogs. Actually this fugus make a problem for breath systems of frog by attacktimg to their nervous systems. Incontrast, listening asserts thatthis idea is not true.
Lasting reason that author explains is that natural habitats of froges are threatened by human activities.Peoples use excessive water use or the draining of wetlands to make them suitable for development. while the proffesor thinks that it is not good idea. As a matter of the fact global warming is the real reason of declining the habitates of frogs and also is harmful for other species.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
...o prevent of declining frog populations.But the proffesore challanged this claim an...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...ed this claim and believed that none of this ways is effective. Pesticides are har...
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...frogs is the first way thet readig shows.. Meanwhile, the lecturer says that this ...
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...his strategy since causes insects damage farmland crops, agriculterers using this...
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..., agriculterers using this method hurt. The second reason that authore debates i...
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...causes the infection of frogs. Actually this fugus make a problem for breath systems...
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Suggestion: Peoples
...oges are threatened by human activities.Peoples use excessive water use or the drainin...
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...reatened by human activities.Peoples use excessive water use or the draining of w...
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Suggestion: While
... to make them suitable for development. while the proffesor thinks that it is not goo...
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Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to make them suitable for development. while the proffesor thinks that it is not goo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 218.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21100917431 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75838774851 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610091743119 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2543583472 49.2860985944 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456650969185 0.272083759551 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15533668978 0.0996497079465 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115606468897 0.0662205650399 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252475262124 0.162205337803 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533012770019 0.0443174109184 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.