TPO 49
The reading specifies that there are three points explain how the humpback whale navigate. However, the professor explains that this points are unconvincing and provides some evidence to refute them all.
First of all, the humpback whales are intelligent and they have a complex brain that prove this. Also, they have a abstract system of sensory such as the night sky orientation. Hence, wales use sky to navigate. Conversely, the professor opposes the idea by saying that ducks have a average cognitive and they do not use stars for orientation. It is a instinct feature they have it since they are born. Therefore, whale which have this feature do not use star for navigation.
Second, the author stated that humpback migrate in a straight lines for long distance. Therefore, they should use some external object or force and since they cannot rely on land features, they rely on stars at night. Nevertheless, the lecturer asserts that whale are sensitive to earth magnative and they use magnatic field of earth to navigate.
Third, whales exhibit an unusual behavior known as spy-hooping. They floating straight up for minutes at a time and in that time their heads are looking upward. Thus, they looking to stars for navigation. In contrast, the professor contradicts this point reasoning that sharks which do not migrate do this action and they do it for searching foor food. Therefore, it is obvious the act of whales are rare but it does not mean they use it for navigation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... brain that prove this. Also, they have a abstract system of sensory such as the ...
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Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...oses the idea by saying that ducks have a average cognitive and they do not use s...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...do not use stars for orientation. It is a instinct feature they have it since the...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, thus, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 250.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.944 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58797217914 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8845573907 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06452816374 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.27373068433 281% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485171469104 0.272083759551 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171999817557 0.0996497079465 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664889748824 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291309946332 0.162205337803 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900657071326 0.0443174109184 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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