TPO 49
The reading specifies that there are three answers explain how humpback whale manage to migrate long distance. However, explainer states that the answers are dobious and not convincing and provides some evidence to refute them all.
First, the humpback whales are more intelligent than other animal and because of their complex brain they can use stars for navigation. Conversley, the professor opposes the idea by saying that there is not a connection between intelligence and sky for orientation. there are others animal like duck use sky to navigate but they have a average cognitive. Duck have this ability since they were born and it is instinct. Therefore, it not a clear connection between navigation and intelligence.
Second, according to the reading, the humpback whale need some external object that helps it to migrate in straight lines for long distance. This creatures swim in the open ocean. Therefore, humpback whale do not rely on earth and stars provide external force. In contrast, the lecturer explains that humpback whale have a bio magnetic in its brain and are sensitive to earth magnatic force. Thus, if humpback whale need external for navigation, it uses the external force of the earth which are sensitive to it.
Third, humpback whales exhibit an unusual behavior know as spy-hopping. It float straight up for minutes at a time and in that time their heads are looking upward to the sky. Nevertheless, the professor contradicts this point by reasoning that it is true humpback whale have rare behavior but there are other animals like shark perform spy-hopping. Sharks do not migrate and do not look at sky and they do it to find animals they wanted to hunt. Also, humpback whale do spy-hopping in the day which there are no stars in the sky.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...n intelligence and sky for orientation. there are others animal like duck use sky to ...
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Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... duck use sky to navigate but they have a average cognitive. Duck have this abili...
^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...te in straight lines for long distance. This creatures swim in the open ocean. There...
^^^^
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'floats'?
Suggestion: floats
...nusual behavior know as spy-hopping. It float straight up for minutes at a time and i...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, thus, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 296.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61994931338 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506756756757 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7898836623 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0588235294 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549101535207 0.272083759551 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174197530292 0.0996497079465 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828437219136 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306366366302 0.162205337803 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758827483411 0.0443174109184 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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