tpo 49
The professor in the lecture raises strong doubt over reading passage arguments and he says the evidence supporting humpback whales migrate are inconvenient.
At the beginning of the lecture the professor says, there is not real connection between intelligent and using stars to navigation. Some birds with average cognitive using stars to find their migrate way. Ducks for instance use stars to navigate but, they are not very smart, they have average general cognitive. They do this instictly. This directly refutes the reading passage which states that because humpback whales has well- developed cognitive ability they can use stars to navigate.
Then the lecturer says, what makes animals able to migrate is straight lines is external forces. Humpback whales has bio-magnetite structure in their brain and it is sensitive to earth magnetic field. accordingly, they use earth magnetic field for oriantaion rather than stars to migrate in straight lines. Again, this refutes what is stated in the reading paragraph which stated that humpbak whales rely on stars at night to provide them with external signs by which to maintain direction over long distance in staright lines.
Finally he points out that, however floating straight up is rare, but other animals such as sharks do the same. As we know sharks do not migrate, they just do that to look for animals they want to hunt. Not only that but humpback whale do this work during day, hence it is not possible they floating straight up to see stars because and they cannot see stars in day. The reading passage on the other hand posits that, floating straight up behaviour provide humpbaack whales with information to navigate by.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Accordingly
...t is sensitive to earth magnetic field. accordingly, they use earth magnetic field for oria...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ver long distance in staright lines. Finally he points out that, however floating st...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, hence, however, look, so, then, well, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 277.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12274368231 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43637648 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534296028881 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3044125436 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481641027026 0.272083759551 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159090423193 0.0996497079465 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648321197526 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274866460521 0.162205337803 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954283234543 0.0443174109184 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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