Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: students are more interested in politics today than the past.
There is no shortage of debate about whether students should be engage in politics or not. Although many believe students were more interested in politics before than they are today, I,on the other hand, believe they are more interested in politics issues today than the past. I will address the most discernible reasons why I feel this way in the following.
To begin with, nowadays in almost 90 percent of countries, people define their country future by participating in election. However, in the past they participated in election as they do today, but their decision has sever effect on their future, due to complicated countries relationships in our period .Accordingly, students as part of a society become more interested in politics issues, in order to be able to choose and rationally vote to right candidate. For instance, about 12 years before, we have controversial election in Iran. We should participated in election to chose our next President. I recall that we have a lot of arguments in our university about candidate merits and their demerits. However I was not interested in politics at the beginning, but after I heard their opinion I became interested to politics issues and I searched internet to find some article about my country politics policies and it’s filure throughout history. Unfortunately, in that specific election wrong codidate won election, and we faced a lot of challengeis, such as united nation and United States sanction, when he was president, but it has a good effect in my country, because more students interested to politics and they tried to enhance their politics knowledges, in order to prevent an other disaster.
Moreover, todays almost all people somehow access to internet and they spend a lot of their time in it. According to new survey about 90 percent of university and 95 percent of high school students are connected to internet for 5 hours a day, and they use a lot of their time using social networks, such as Twitter, Facebook or Instagram and so on. Politician are aware about that and they constantly advertise themselves in these network. Thus, they always see them they gradually become interested to them, due to their curiousity. My brother experience is a compelling example of this. Two years a go my father bought a smart phone to my little brother for his birthday, and he immediately installed Instagram and Twitter app on his device. After a while he asked me some question about our country policies and about politiotion and also about some economy crisis, such as inflation. I knew he was not interested to these concept, hence I asked him why he wanted to know about them. I realized he saw some politician advertising in Twitter and read their comments in Istragram. This example illustrate that students became interested to politics because new technology gives this opportunity to politician to advertise themselves on the internet.
In conclusion, it is for all the aforementioned reasons, I firmly believe that nowadays students are more interested in politics than the past. This is because people want to define their countries future by participation in election, and because they constantly see politics issues in social networks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2703.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 531.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09039548023 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89800220882 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478342749529 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 873.9 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.1893130003 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.863636364 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1363636364 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77272727273 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220307279911 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656082076073 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944423889149 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182799043633 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887647616408 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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