The article and the lecture both discuss the theory behind humpback whales navigation system. The reading claims that the stars assist whales to navigate. The lecturer, however, refutes the author's assessment and contends that stars is highly unlikely to be relative.
The first allegation of the script against which the orator argues is the possibility that the intelligence instinct help humpback whales to navigate. The lecturer refuted this point by stating that intelligence has nothing to do with navigation.He provides an example of other animals like ducks. He asserts that ducks use the stars to navigate inspite of not being intelligent.Thus intelligence is an instinct which independent from navigation.
Secondly, according to the speaker stars do not assist whales to move in straight lines, instead, there are some bio magnetic receptors in the brain which helps whales to move in this direction. Ultimately, These magnetic receptors collect information from the surroundings and assist whale in their movement. Moreover, these receptors help whales to position themselves in relation to their location..
Finally, the lecturer contradicts the fallacy of the passage that whales spy-hop to look for information about their direction . He contends that sharks spy-hop, however,sharks spy-hop not to navigate, but to search for a food.Besides, whale spy-hop during the day, when no stars are in the sky.Thus, sky hopping is a movement which is not related to the instinct of navigation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at the stars assist whales to navigate. The lecturer, however, refutes the authors ...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ate. The lecturer, however, refutes the authors assessment and contends that stars is h...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s is highly unlikely to be relative. The first allegation of the script against ...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tinct help humpback whales to navigate. The lecturer refuted this point by stating ...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...gence has nothing to do with navigation.He provides an example of other animals li...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...vigate inspite of not being intelligent.Thus intelligence is an instinct which indep...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...vigate inspite of not being intelligent.Thus intelligence is an instinct which indep...
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Line 4, column 400, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...themselves in relation to their location.. Finally, the lecturer contradicts th...
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Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ok for information about their direction . He contends that sharks spy-hop, howeve...
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Line 6, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sharks
...He contends that sharks spy-hop, however,sharks spy-hop not to navigate, but to search ...
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Line 6, column 221, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...-hop not to navigate, but to search for a food.Besides, whale spy-hop during the day, ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...t to navigate, but to search for a food.Besides, whale spy-hop during the day, when no ...
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Line 6, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...g the day, when no stars are in the sky.Thus, sky hopping is a movement which is not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.01324503311 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5367965368 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96057313903 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7712120981 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.272727273 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06452816374 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321013332585 0.272083759551 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123764398401 0.0996497079465 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444986258367 0.0662205650399 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184674722634 0.162205337803 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100767959135 0.0443174109184 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.2367328918 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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