TPO 5-INTEGRATED
the passage is about a great houses. based on the passage there are three theories about these mysterious houses. the firt theory says that the buildings had used for residentation of families, the secind theory says that the building has used for storing the grain maze, and the third theory says that the houses had used for ceremonies. the man in the lecture says that all of these theories are incorrec. i want to explain the reasons.
first let us look at the first theory. for living hundreds of people in a house we need many fireplaces and also many rooms but based on the evidents the number of the rooms and fireplaces is enough for just ten fa,ilies. so, the lecturer denied the first theory.
in addition, the man in the conversation reject the second theory, too. he says, experiments do not show any documents about the grain maze. also, based on the passage for keeping the grain maze we need big trainer but there are not trainers in the buildings.
the third theory is about that building had used for ceremonis. but the man in the conversation implies that pots that had found in the buldings are not sufficient document for this theory and they may belongs to construction workers.
in a nutshell, all theories that state in the passage rejected by the man in the convarsation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...correc. i want to explain the reasons. first let us look at the first theory. for li...
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...ersation reject the second theory, too. he says, experiments do not show any docum...
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...ere are not trainers in the buildings. the third theory is about that building had...
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...y may belongs to construction workers. in a nutshell, all theories that state in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, may, second, so, third, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 229.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68122270742 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49396594509 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489082969432 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.2293582591 49.2860985944 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5714285714 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06452816374 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.3589403974 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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