TPO 54- integrated the lake's water is salty. the problem can be diminished by: directly removing the salt, diluting the salt with ocean's water, constructing separation walls in the lake.
The article asserts that due to the evaporation of a lake's water (The Salton Sea), it is gradually becoming more salty and provides three theories for reversing this phenomenon. The professor, on the other hand, opposes all the author's ideas and claims that these solutions are not realistic and practical. In the following, her explanations, used to shed light on this controversial argument, will be discussed thoroughly.
First of all, the reading says that the salt can be directly removed from the water thanks to special facilities. Although the professor accepts that this process might reduce salinity, she declares that it is followed by serious problems. As water must be pumped to these facilities, it evaporates inevitably; therefore, other solid materials will remain in the place. These substances can dissolve in water which poses other critical healthy risks. Moreover, some of these chemicals are toxic, such as Sellenium, which can be harmful for humans if they breathe it.
Secondly, the passage suggests that ocean's water can be added to the lake in order to dilute its salt. The educator, however, rejects this presumption, mainly because she believes that this process requires the construction of pipe lines and canals which needs scores of financial resources. As this convey is about 100 kilometers, the construction of this long distance is not economical and feasible.
Tertiary, the essay proposes that by building partitions in the lake, the lake's salinity can be controlled. The lecturer overthrows this suggestion insomuch as she thinks that this is not a long-term solution. As the lake is located on a high geological active site, it is prone to intense earth-related activities like earth quakes. Provided that these major natural disasters occur, the walls used to seperate the lake will collapse, and water from high salty parts will go to low salty main sectors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lakes'' or 'lake's'?
Suggestion: lakes'; lake's
...by building partitions in the lake, the lakes salinity can be controlled. The lecture...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 305.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25245901639 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77172346277 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603278688525 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6930111506 49.2860985944 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.8 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373371006633 0.272083759551 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120486956917 0.0996497079465 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104520186942 0.0662205650399 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219435687161 0.162205337803 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413151526172 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.42419426049 119% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 63.6247240618 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.