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There has been some debate among advertisers whether buzzers are beneficial or not. The lecture says that buzzers are great. However, the reading refutes saying that buzzers have some disadvantages.
The first point of dispute is if the person praising the product is being paid to praise the products. The lecturer says that the buzzers get paid to tell the truth to the customers. But the reading disagrees stating that what the buzzer say is just advertising, which may give the person incorrect information about the buzzed products.
Another controversial issue is that if the consumers have could ask or claim about any products with the buzzer or not. The man says that the consumers ask a lot of questions and if the buzzers do not have the good answers, the consumer will not buy the products. But, the reading argues that if the consumer listen to the buzzers as a private individual that will harm the consumers.
the final point of dispute is if the buzzers have harmful effect on the social relation ships. The lecture claims that the buzzers improve the civilization among people. If the customers have a good experience with the products, that will open people up to more trustful world. Yet the reading opposes this point saying that buzzing result in the spread of mistrust and the expectation of dishonesty.
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There has been some debate among advertisers w...
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...that buzzers have some disadvantages. The first point of dispute is if the per...
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...the products. The lecturer says that the buzzers get paid to tell the truth to th...
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...information about the buzzed products. Another controversial issue is that if t...
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...tions and if the buzzers do not have the good answers, the consumer will not buy ...
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...ividual that will harm the consumers. the final point of dispute is if the buz...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92640692641 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5491477169 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6020457993 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06452816374 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288442648111 0.272083759551 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106418587358 0.0996497079465 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529153641533 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17710199902 0.162205337803 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655627322325 0.0443174109184 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.3589403974 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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