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There has been a debate among the extinction of the sea cows. The reading states three theories about the main cause of the extinction. However, the lecture refutes saying that all the theories mentioned in the reading have some problems.
The first point of dispute is if the overhunting by the Siberian people cause the extinction. The lecture claims that the sea cows were very massive creature and a couple of them cold feed a village of Siberian people for whole month. There was no need for over hunting. On the other hand the reading contradicts this point saying that Siberian people overhunted the sea cows as they were a good sources of food in harsh environment.
Another controversial issue is if the decrease in the kelp population cause the extinction. The lecturer says that there were no evidence in the decline of the kelp. Because the whales were marein animals as well like the kelp and there were no reports for decline in the whales. But the reading opposes this point saying that the ecosystem disturbance cause decline in the kelp population which is the main source of food for the sea cows.
The final point of dispute is if the European fur traders lead to the extinction. The professor contends that the population of the sea cows was already in decline after the arrival of the European to the island. Some thing else rather than the European cause the extinction. Yet, the reading refutes this point by stating that European fur trader caught the last sea cow in 1768. which means that they are one of the cause to the extinction.
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There has been a debate among the extinction of the se...
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There has been a debate among the extinction of the sea cows. The read...
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...ed in the reading have some problems. The first point of dispute is if the ov...
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... The first point of dispute is if the overhunting by the Siberian people cause...
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...ld feed a village of Siberian people for whole month. There was no need for over ...
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...sources of food in harsh environment. Another controversial issue is if the de...
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... the whales were marein animals as well like the kelp and there were no reports for ...
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...main source of food for the sea cows. The final point of dispute is if the Eur...
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... arrival of the European to the island. Some thing else rather than the European cause the...
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...trader caught the last sea cow in 1768. which means that they are one of the cause to...
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...trader caught the last sea cow in 1768. which means that they are one of the cause to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74911660777 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42224537551 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452296819788 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6624802839 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06452816374 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461658507054 0.272083759551 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152755577863 0.0996497079465 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824679246591 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276096653339 0.162205337803 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510435178422 0.0443174109184 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.42419426049 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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