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The reading states three theories about the main cause of the sea cows extinction. However, the lecture refutes saying that all the theories mentioned in the reading have some problems.
The first point of dispute is if the overhunting by the Siberian people cause the extinction. The lecture claims that the sea cows were very massive creature and a couple of them cold feed a village of Siberian people for whole month. There was no need for over hunting. On the other hand the reading contradicts this point saying that Siberian people overhunted the sea cows as they were good sources of food in harsh environment.
Another controversial issue is if the decrease in the kelps population cause the extinction. The lecturer says that there were no evidence in that the kelp population affected by the ecosystem disturbance decline. Because the whales were marine animals as well and there were no reports for decline in there population. But, the reading opposes this point saying that the ecosystem disturbance cause decline in the kelp population which is the main source of food for the sea cows.
The final point of dispute is if the European fur traders lead to the extinction. The professor contends that the population of the sea cows was already in decline after the arrival of the European fur traders to the island. Some thing else rather than the European cause the extinction. Yet, the reading refutes this point by stating that European fur traders caught the last sea cow in 1768. which means that they were responsible for the extinction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed in the reading have some problems. The first point of dispute is if the ove...
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...ld feed a village of Siberian people for whole month. There was no need for over ...
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...sources of food in harsh environment. Another controversial issue is if the de...
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...versial issue is if the decrease in the kelps population cause the extinction. The le...
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...main source of food for the sea cows. The final point of dispute is if the Eur...
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...the European fur traders to the island. Some thing else rather than the European cause the...
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...raders caught the last sea cow in 1768. which means that they were responsible for th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 273.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52331770834 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443223443223 0.540411800872 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3349685156 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06452816374 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444332861907 0.272083759551 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157328828951 0.0996497079465 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10321232775 0.0662205650399 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277524792879 0.162205337803 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412120700518 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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