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Both the reading and the lecture talk about the migration of the humpbacks. The reading states that the humpbacks navigate using the stars. However, the lecture refutes this point saying that the humpbacks are navigating by other things rather than the stars.
First, the author the reading beleives that the humpbacks are intelligent enough to use the stars while the are migrating. For example, they can use night sky for their orientation. But, the lecturer rebuts this argument. she suggests that there is no connection between the whales intelligent and their ability to navigate. For example, ducks are not that intelligent and they are able to navigate.
Second, the author points out that humpbacks are able to navigate in straight line because they use the stars as an external objects to help them. Yet, this point is challenged by the lecturer. he says that that for animals to move in straight lines they need to send some external forces. For example, the humpbacks have bio magnitude force in their brains which help them to navigate by using the earth magnetic field.
Third the reading contends that humpbacks exhibit spy hoping. It is unusual behavior help them to navigate by looking at the stars. On the other hand, the professor opposes. He says that spy hopping is a rare behavior. It is exhibit in some sharks to help them look for animals they want to hunt. It is poor speculation that humpbacks are using spy hooping to navigate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...saying that the humpbacks are navigating by other things rather than the stars. ...
^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...telligent enough to use the stars while the are migrating. For example, they can use ni...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...But, the lecturer rebuts this argument. she suggests that there is no connection be...
^^^
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...is point is challenged by the lecturer. he says that that for animals to move in s...
^^
Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... is challenged by the lecturer. he says that that for animals to move in straight lines t...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, second, so, third, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42883263786 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497975708502 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5964132986 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8888888889 110.228320801 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7222222222 21.698381199 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06452816374 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440727798621 0.272083759551 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130386451465 0.0996497079465 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760758123385 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257681312227 0.162205337803 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061936802137 0.0443174109184 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.3589403974 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.8541721854 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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